To live more than 80years or not
To live for more than 80years old can do a lot of things but I would like to live less than 80years. There are three reasons that I prefer to live less than 80years old. First, body become unhealthy; second, active become slowly and finally I don’t want to family worry me.
I don’t want to family worry me and I become unhealthy that I need family to take care my live. My active become slowly and not lively I think that would be uncomfortable.
I'd like to live less than 80years old. It can reduce a lot family problems so i think to live less is a good way.
I don’t want to family worry me and I become unhealthy that I need family to take care my live. My active become slowly and not lively I think that would be uncomfortable.
I'd like to live less than 80years old. It can reduce a lot family problems so i think to live less is a good way.


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於 2008年11月6日 晚上7:40 ,
chooose what you love; love what you choose 提到...
I like this topic for living less than 80 years old. In my opinion,
do not use too much " I don't". Unfortunately, there are some mistakes about the tense, missing some words. If you can revise these mistakes, this essay will look more better.
於 2008年11月6日 晚上7:53 ,
emily 提到...
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於 2008年11月6日 晚上7:53 ,
emily 提到...
HI....
i like your thought in article...
because family can't worry about us all day long, right....
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